Filming Day 3

After recent comments about my choice (or lack of definitive) target audience, when my teacher gave me feedback about using a 'white artist and a black character narrative' made me wonder does this work? Does it matter? Does it make a considerable difference? Does it make any difference? But it was a fair comment and made me think...*thinking*... voila..I myself will now be the artist, and after this revelation I filmed again, on a mellow Friday afternoon (17th February 2012). It was me and a fellow class mate, in my desired location, kind of planned improvising, filming a range of shots in and around the same location, me performing the song. I will begin to properly edit these shots on the Monday after half term (tomorrow).

Before?

After? ;)

Rough Cut Feedback

On Friday (3rd February) I showed my class what I edited so far, the feedback was mostly positive. Some feedback I received was:

• The range of shots I used was really good
• The narrative began well 
• Was clear to see the characters were a couple.
• Make shots more focused